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anyone feel like proofreading a media kit?	by tesla_koil	2008-08-22 08:03:53
20MB PDF file!	by voxwoman	2008-08-22 08:18:15
Yeah its setup to go to printers (n/t)	by tesla_koil	2008-08-22 08:21:52
can I email you my comments?	by voxwoman	2008-08-22 08:27:12
Sure that would be great	by tesla_koil	2008-08-22 08:28:09
I hope you still "like me" when I'm done	by voxwoman	2008-08-22 08:36:56
Off the top general comments	by voxwoman	2008-08-22 08:51:21
1. the kerning in the headers is off somehow. Too much gap between the K and T in "MARKETING" 2. the variable font size for "emphasis" of random words is REALLY ANNOYING. You also have larger font with a different color for emphasis. Please pick one style and use that consistently. 3. The overall look and feel of the brochure is very nice. The color schemes are luxurious. 4. What is the purpose of the brochure (why are there 2 pages about art development in the media kit)? 5. There are some hyphenation issues, and I'd choose not to hyphenate words in paragraphs (makes things harder to read). 6. Graphics are really nice. 7. There is a tendency to purple prose when talking about the game. It makes it a bit too melodramatic, IMHO. I wish I had more time right now, but I have to grab lunch and then spew out 3500 words of marketing dreck for some product brochures. I will send you the marked up PDF with the more aggegious errors highlighted (got to fix that kerning problem in the headlines).
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