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wizard's revenge	by dennismv	2006-11-19 12:55:59
Can someone critique/offer ideas for the following ? Synopsis: Dark and Evil master kills a magician with a knife. A wizard happens to see the scene but it's too late before he can intervene. The scene is of wizard's revenge. I had some trouble coming up with exactly what I wanted, but here's what I have: revenge scene. I wonder if there is a better way to do revenge. I wanted the wizard to use his knife in some way to make a counterpoint to master's knife without mimicking the master way of killing. But do something with a knife as in, I can top you even in your own game, master. But now that I've shown you I can do that, let's play by my own rules and blow you away. I didn't quite get this in the script but that's what I'd like to have there. Is there any way to do this ?
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Hmm...	by confused.brit	2006-06-18 05:13:52

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