Also note, I may be American, but my English is lacking as well, so don't take this as 100% definative. Removals done in strikes, and adds done in bold. There are hyphens strikes out too :P And some puntcuation thats hard to see if you don't look for it.
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It happened at a time that twins were conceived into in a womb. The weeks passed and the boys grew up. A, and as their consciousness grew, their delight also grew.
"Say, isn't it wonderful that we have been conceived? Isn't it wonderful that we live?"
The twins began to discover their world. But when they found the umbilical cord that connected them with their mother and that gave them nutrition, they started singing in delight:
"How large is our mother's love that she shares her own life with us!"
As the weeks passed and eventually became months, they suddenly noticed how much they had changed.
"What does that mean?" one twin asked the other.
"That means," the other replied "our visit to earth is nearing its end."
"But I don't want to leave," the first said, "I want to stay here forever."
"We don't have any other choice," the other answered, "but maybe there is a life after birth."
"How could that possibly be?" the first asked in doubt. "We will lose our cord of life and how should we live without it? And tThere have others been leaving this womb before us, and none of them has come back and told us that there is a life after birth. - No, birth is the end!"
So one of them fell into deep sorrow and said: "If the conception ends with birth, where is the meaning of the life in the womb? It is meaningless! - Maybe there is no mother after all."
"But she has to exist," the other protested, "how else should we have come here? And hHow should we still live?"
"Have you ever seen our mother?" the one asked. "Maybe she only lives in our imagination. We have thought her up, because we could understand our lives better that way!"
And so the last days in their mother's womb were filled mitwith questions and great fear. Eventually the moment of birth came.
As the twins left their world, they opened their eyes. - They cried.
What they saw, exceeded their boldest dreams.
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