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I'm scared ... by Linfalgamo 2002-06-17 22:54:36
... I just found some poetry on my computer, and I don't know how it got there. I might have written it, but I don't really remember writing it. But I don't know where I could have copied it from since I don't remember going to any poetry websites. Any ideas?

*****

Darkness surrounds and deadens sound
The clock ticks silently round
The world melts and frays
Edges coming undone tearing in
And back out
Only string remains

Blindly tumbling through tacky clouds
I catch my arms on wisps and wind
Breathlessly the world around me is silent
Calmly my unseeing eyes look left
Look right
Blinking

Caught below an oppressive weight
I fight upwards to waking light
Sounds enter and fade quickly
Turning and tumbling up and down
Down and up
Until I land

*****

I think its pretty good, and thats what makes me wonder. Cause I don't write poetry like this, or maybe I do and just don't remember. I think I need to start seeing a shrink.
[ Reply ]
  i would almost have said.. by ubergeek22002-06-17 22:56:37
  hmmm by CrazySteve2002-06-17 23:06:51
    I suppose I should ... by Linfalgamo2002-06-17 23:17:11
  see a shrink by LunarRainn2002-06-17 23:44:48

 

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