The comic itself is not bad for a start.

Two parts are somewhat dificult to make out :

• Where the heck does one frame start and the other begin ?
• Who is saying what ?
• The page is even wider than my 1280 * 1024 screen

But once someone figured that out it's quite .. ahhh ... ahhh ... interesting ;-)

Keep up the work, the style will get better over the next years (or decades) ;-)